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This is the most important project of the quarter. We are asked to create an argumentative essay about the novel we read which is Anak Perawan di Sarang Penyamun. This is my best sample of work because in this project, i put much effort to create the essay. The essay score is better to some other project i've done. This is my best sample of work because this essay truly help me in achieving good score for the report card. The teacher's still judge me to replace some minor error and ineffective sentence to create the essay better. Generally, the essay was very argumentative about the opinion i chose. Still, i hope to get a better score. I must reduce the ineffective sentences and analyse deeper about the book.
I did good in finding the quotation to relate and support about my opinion of the book's character's characteristic. I also put my best in relating some reality into the essay to make my argument getting stronger. By knowing deeper of the book, i know more about the character and that is why i develop a statement into one argumentative paragraph. I insert important details into the books about the effect of the characteristic the character has. I found difficult in developing the argument i have. All major details have been put into the essay and I ran out of ideas. The teacher mentioned that some lines are not related to the argument I have. I found easy in finding the the quotation I need to put because the quotation are the base I use to create the essay. Before i created the essay about the character's characteristic, I observed the quotation about the character so that i can easily make the essay with a prove. Next time, I should stay focus about the problem and characteristic the character has and dig deeper about it so I could develop the argument into focused paragraph.
The essay is related to the Thinkers because in this project we need to think critically and analytically deeper about the character so that our argument is supported by any evidence. Not only that, we need to think how to develop the an argument into one focused essay. We also need to think how can the each sentence related to the argument, not going outside the line. We need to think how the quotation we got from the book support our argument or statement i have. We required to think outside the "box" to create a well argumentative essay and also informative.
I did good in finding the quotation to relate and support about my opinion of the book's character's characteristic. I also put my best in relating some reality into the essay to make my argument getting stronger. By knowing deeper of the book, i know more about the character and that is why i develop a statement into one argumentative paragraph. I insert important details into the books about the effect of the characteristic the character has. I found difficult in developing the argument i have. All major details have been put into the essay and I ran out of ideas. The teacher mentioned that some lines are not related to the argument I have. I found easy in finding the the quotation I need to put because the quotation are the base I use to create the essay. Before i created the essay about the character's characteristic, I observed the quotation about the character so that i can easily make the essay with a prove. Next time, I should stay focus about the problem and characteristic the character has and dig deeper about it so I could develop the argument into focused paragraph.
The essay is related to the Thinkers because in this project we need to think critically and analytically deeper about the character so that our argument is supported by any evidence. Not only that, we need to think how to develop the an argument into one focused essay. We also need to think how can the each sentence related to the argument, not going outside the line. We need to think how the quotation we got from the book support our argument or statement i have. We required to think outside the "box" to create a well argumentative essay and also informative.
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